Thursday 10 April 2014

Great writing from Room 2

Good vs Bad
by Boaz
Once a upon time there was a wonderful kingdom and it was very pleasant to live in. The villagers had a few coins to spend and keep. Everyone who came there loved it and everyone who lived there loved it. There were a lot of orphans in the village but they were taken care of by the older people in the church. Their parents got murdered by all the enemies of the kingdom.  The kingdom was called the Golden Lions, and had a massive castle that the king and his family lived in. The kingdom had an enemy called the Purple Dragons and were under the control of an evil witch but the real leader was the Dragon of Doom.
The witch called Amelia, wanted the Castle and the beautiful kingdom for herself. Her army was very strong and there were hundreds of thousands of them. No one had ever broken into their kingdom. Many armies tried but they never came back alive. They may have been able to get past the first and second guards but when they entered the palace they saw the real army. They would faint from fright and get captured.
The Dragon of Doom wanted the Princess because she had the crown of Zollock. The crown controlled the underworld and she would make a nice meal.
The Witch and the Dragon worked together making a very strong evil team. The Princess finds out about the evil plot but her dad the king doesn’t believe her. She goes to the general of the Knights and she begs him to help her. He says ok but only if you stop complaining.
Together they work out how to use the crown to control the under army and the Dragon of Doom. When he is asleep they sneak up and steal a diamond off his head. They put the diamond onto the crown and can then control the dragon.
When the witch and her army attack them  they command the Dragon and the underworld army to fight them. When the Dragon defeats the Witch the Princess commands them to return to the underworld and to never return.
The Princess and the General return to the castle and hold a big music party for all the kingdom. They all lived happily ever after.

The Missing Fairy by Praise
Once upon a time there lived some fairies. They are called The Jewels. Their names are Praise,  Gem and Ruby. Ruby is the youngest, Praise is the oldest and Gem is 13.  They are the best fairy friends ever. But one night a fairy went missing somewhere.Everyone in the Castle looked for the fairy to but  no-one could find her anywhere.
Unknown to anyone Julia the friendly fairy got locked up in the bakery. Mr. Adams did not see her behind the counter and accidentally locked the door. The next day the fairy got free.  She tried to find The Jewels but she couldn’t find them. She looked for ages and ages and ages until the sun went down and then she went to bed. In the morning the fairy friends shouted hooray and they hugged Julia so much she nearly choked.